The exciting Adventure

I went for a walk. I found a really small cat. It was so ugly that I took it all the way home. I put it in my room. To my amazement , it began to dance . I was excited . I took it to the school. I showed it to all my classmates. I decided to feed it in a box and wrap it up with wrapping paper. I gave it to a friend for a present.When my friend opened it my friend was shoked. My friend shouted, Thank you! This is the best present I’ve ever had!

我去走路，發現了一隻很小的貓，他長得很醜，所以我就把它帶回家了，我把它放進我的房間，讓我很興奮，牠突然跳起舞來，我很興奮，所以我就把牠帶去學校，拿去給我同學，我決定在箱子裡胃牠，在用紙把牠包起來，我把它送給我朋友，我朋友打開來他嚇到了，我的朋友大叫說謝謝這是我看過最棒的禮物。